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Post by Yunii on 24th October 2010, 2:46 pm

Well i just wrote down an idea that came to my mind and thought i could post it here o3o
it's a piece (not beginning it's something that happeneds in between but it's something that doesn't say that much xD BUT i like it o3o) of a story i'm writing on o3o

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you can download it there (gosh i'm sorry for posting it at a download site )
I really hope someone will read it and give me some feedback x3
so have fun XD

(these monkeys are epic 8D)

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Post by BlackLolitarose on 24th October 2010, 3:41 pm

It's really great so far!
Keep going for it!
I especially like the strange relationship between Lia and Caleb, and how well you described it. It's all very good. ^^

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Post by Yunii on 24th October 2010, 4:53 pm

aww thank you so much o3o

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