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 Flight of Hearts [BETA] - How to Train Your Dragon

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PostSubject: Flight of Hearts [BETA] - How to Train Your Dragon   Sun 3 Apr - 16:02



^__^ A beta I uploaded. This is like, the second time Ive tried editing a movie - so Im very...inexperienced at it and Id love some suggestions or critiques! Just tell me what you guys think / ideas for how I can improve what I have so far.

waaaht Warning: Epic Failz up ahead...

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PostSubject: Re: Flight of Hearts [BETA] - How to Train Your Dragon   Sun 10 Apr - 17:53

Aww I think that was adorable. I've never edited movies before so I can't give you much crit regarding them but there's a few things you might want to try and polish up.

1. Some of your blurs near the start last a little too long. Mainly when there's fast scene changes, nothing major so maybe you could just shorten it by 1-2 keyframes.
2. For me I didn't like the cross zoom transition at 0:18. I think a hardcut with a short zoom out(2-3 keyframes) would fit better. But it's up to you, you could try and if you don't like it, stick with the cross zoom.
3. The pan/scene sync FX around 0:19ish..doesn't quite fit with the beats, I think it would work without them. Just focus on the lyric sync rather than beat sync.
4. I didn't really like the flickering scene sync around 0:27 but I don't have any other suggestions for you atm so maybe just leave it. XD
5. 0:34 onwards is very nice scene selection-wise. Though you could try playing with some short zooms and light flashes to make the pacing faster and more dynamic for the chorus?

Hope that helps you :)
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PostSubject: Re: Flight of Hearts [BETA] - How to Train Your Dragon   Wed 13 Apr - 0:03

You shouldn't look at movies as something your inexperienced with. You should look at it as if it was anything else you've edited with. It's just a bunch of clips smashed together. Thinking about it that way might be of some help~

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